22 Mar The poetry of death
Mostly unheard of in Western culture, where the document most commonly associated with death is a will—a binding legal document descriptive of property but little poetry, jisei, or death poetry, is a poem completed near the time of death; a profound, personal epitaph for a once in a lifetime event—suitably fitting farewell to one’s life.
While death as a theme in poetry is not uncommon; witness death as one of the main themes of Emily Dickinson:
More than the Grave is closed to me
More than the Grave is closed to me —
The Grave and that Eternity
To which the Grave adheres —
I cling to nowhere till I fall —
The Crash of nothing, yet of all —
How similar appears —
—Emily Dickinson
or as sublime meditation on the nature of reality:
I and Death
My body saw death
Without fear.
My heart conquered death
With love.
My soul embraced death
With compassion.
I employ death
With no hesitation.
—Sri Chinmoy
—a poem written to mark one’s own death, or more accurately, to uniquely commemorate a life lived, is a practise that reached its eventual refinement in Japan, in Zen Buddhism in particular. It was also common in China until the twentieth century.
Jisei by convention are written in a graceful, natural manner, and never mention death explicitly, using instead metaphoric references to nature, often in the form of sunsets, autumn or falling cherry blossoms:
When autumn winds blow
not one leaf remains
the way it was.
—Togyu
As elsewhere in Japanese art, feelings of bitter-sweetness and impermanence dominate, a feature of the Zen Buddhist informed aesthetic mono no aware (a sensitivity to things), a conception of beauty virtually part of the national character.
While the popular image of jisei is as a part of ceremonial seppuku (Japanese ritual suicide), death poems were also written by Zen monks, haiku poets, and from ancient times literate people on their deathbed.
Poems were not always composed the moment before death; respected poets would sometimes be consulted well in advance for their assistance, and even after death one’s poem could be polished or even rewritten by others—a deed never mentioned lest the deceased’s legacy be tarnished.
Had I not known
that I was dead
already
I would have mourned
the loss of my life.
—Ota Dokan
Normally highly poetic and somewhat oblique, jisei could also contain elements of a traditional will; not the mundane affairs of an estate to be settled, but for example reconciling differences between estranged relatives.
Prominent exponents of jisei include the famous haiku poet Basho; Asano Naganori, the daimyo (fuedal leader) whose forced suicide was avenged by the forty-seven ronin—now almost a national myth; and Yukio Mishima, prominent Japanese writer of the mid-twentieth century who inexplicably committed traditional seppuku in 1970:
Yukio Mishima’s Death Poem
A small night storm blows
Saying ‘falling is the essence of a flower’
Preceding those who hesitate
—Yukio Mishima
Lyra
Posted at 06:26h, 25 MarchExquisite blog!
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Jaitra Gillespie
Posted at 08:30h, 25 MarchThank you Lyra! I am beginning Spanish lessons right now so that I can return an informed compliment about your blog.
Lyra
Posted at 00:35h, 29 MarchHello again ;O)
It´s ok, you can always start by reading my English post:
http://alinguagemdocaos.blogspot.com/2008/03/fractal-poetry.html
Greetings
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savannah
Posted at 21:51h, 31 Marchwell said… suitably fitting farewell to one’s life.
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Carlos Mal Pacheco
Posted at 18:13h, 30 JulyI re-published Mishima’s Death Poem in my blog, I hope it’s not a problem. Yours is a very interesting space and I plan to follow it.
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I don’t think that Mishima committed seppuku “inexplicably”. His mind went through a personal hell during his adolescence and youth; his plays and novels announced a continuous, tiring hunger for destruction and rebirth, a longing for a romantic past that drove him to the dramatic, if not operatic, storming of the military headquarters where he and his favorite pupils committed seppuku.
To me it was perfectly logical and beautiful.
.-= Carlos Mal Pacheco´s last blog ..EL POEMA DE DESPEDIDA DE MISHIMA =-.
Jaitra
Posted at 22:25h, 31 JulyThanks for the comment Carlos, and for reading. You may have inspired another post on the topic, so, selfishly keeping a substantial reply to myself for now, I’ll keep my words and comments brief. Would it be rude of me though to ask for a link back? Believe it or not I did actual offline research to discover Mishima’s death poem—reading books something of a strange concept these internet generated days. I may even publish his second death poem one day…
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Carlos Mal Pacheco
Posted at 12:05h, 01 AugustMr. Jaitra, I supposed you had dug up that death poem from books and actual research, because yours was the only effective result I got after searching for Mishima’s jeisei, and that’s why I asked your authorisation for to publish your finding.
I would love to read more about Mishima, keep it up!
.-= Carlos Mal Pacheco´s last blog ..EL POEMA DE DESPEDIDA DE MISHIMA =-.
ilovepoetry
Posted at 14:06h, 14 SeptemberLike your poetry. I love reading poetry and writing it. Lately I’ve been posting a lot of love poems on http://www.unitedworldpoets.com. The site is running a free poetry contest this month that has a cash prize I’m hoping to win, wish me luck. Writing poetry is how I release my emotions.
Jaitra
Posted at 14:21h, 14 SeptemberWhile I have my doubts that you are a real person ilovepoetry, flattery is a sure fire way to publication on this blog, even if said poems are not actually by myself.
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ashok
Posted at 05:51h, 08 JulyThis is very, very interesting – I hadn’t heard of jisei before. I’ve bookmarked the post; Ota Dokan’s statement/poem is something I really need to put in my journal, and the Togyu poem is terribly wonderful.
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Jaitra
Posted at 06:28h, 08 JulyThanks for visiting Ashok. I will keep an interested eye on your fine journal, as I’ve barely even scratched the surface of this particular topic or said poets.
Alan Summers
Posted at 07:20h, 04 JuneDear Jaitra,
Would it be possible to know the translator’s name if Yukio Mishima did not write the above verse in English? Often translator’s names go uncredited yet it is their copyright, as they create a new work in their translation language of choice, from the original work.
kindest regards,
Alan
Paul
Posted at 23:38h, 04 JanuaryHi Jaitra,
I don’t know if you maintain this blog anymore, but I just wanted to let you know that what you have as Mishima’s death poem is not remotely like the original.
Here is the real one
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Masurao ga
Tabasamu tachi no
sayanari ni
Ikutose taete
Kyo no hatsushimo
The sheaths of swords rattle
As after years of endurance
Brave men set out
To tread upon the first frost of the year
Regards.
Paul
Jaitra
Posted at 09:22h, 09 FebruaryThanks so much Paul. I’ve been inactive for a long time here, but still no excuse for incorrect information — I’ll correct it now.
I got my version of the death poem from “Mishima’s Sword”
by Christopher Ross, which at the time was the only place (in English) I’d ever seen it, but although entertaining I doubt this book is an academic authority.
Jaitra
Posted at 09:28h, 09 FebruaryUpdate — further research reveals that (again according to Christoper Ross) Mishima wrote a second death poem, which is the poem I quoted originally. Here is Ross on the topic:
Jaitra
Posted at 09:33h, 09 FebruaryHi Alan,
I’ve checked my original source for this poem, “Mishima’s Sword” by Christopher Ross, and unfortunately the translator doesn’t appear to be credited. Which is a shame because I now have enough Japanese myself to know how subjective translation can be!
Regards,
Jaitra