Comments on: You made me do it http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/ sensitivitytothings.com Fri, 12 Mar 2010 21:38:22 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Jaitra Gillespie http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-680 Jaitra Gillespie Mon, 23 Jul 2007 20:43:24 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-680 <p>Thanks Lisa. I stand corrected of my lyrical ways.</p> Thanks Lisa. I stand corrected of my lyrical ways.

]]> By: Lisa Andel http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-679 Lisa Andel Mon, 23 Jul 2007 20:35:22 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-679 If you mean by lyricism: stylistic language that says one thing and means another. Then I say, so what? To me, these lines are just as lyrical: as happy as anywhere else, as happy as any other. simple words that make a strong statement. I like it. If you mean by lyricism: stylistic language that says one thing and means another. Then I say, so what? To me, these lines are just as lyrical:
as happy as anywhere else,
as happy as any other.

simple words that make a strong statement. I like it.

]]> By: Tejvan - net writing http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-678 Tejvan - net writing Mon, 23 Jul 2007 19:18:34 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-678 Hi John, did you ever fix the a issue, after migration? http://www.bloggingtips.com/2007/07/20/fixing-the-a-and-ae-problem-in-wordpress/ I don't think this comment is related to poetry, sorry. Hi John,

did you ever fix the a issue, after migration?

http://www.bloggingtips.com/2007/07/20/fixing-the-a-and-ae-problem-in-wordpress/

I don’t think this comment is related to poetry, sorry.

]]> By: Jaitra Gillespie http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-677 Jaitra Gillespie Mon, 23 Jul 2007 18:08:48 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-677 Gosh—you're all so nice! Helpful also—I’m new to this poetry thing. Thanks for the encouragement Alf, Rhian, Joy, Camille, Julia and Susan. I believe I have some poetry to read myself now in return. Gosh—you’re all so nice!

Helpful also—I’m new to this poetry thing. Thanks for the encouragement Alf, Rhian, Joy, Camille, Julia and Susan.

I believe I have some poetry to read myself now in return.

]]> By: Susan Helene Gottfried http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-676 Susan Helene Gottfried Mon, 23 Jul 2007 15:42:36 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-676 This is really lovely, John. I hope as it grows and changes, you'll share it again so we can see how it matured. This is really lovely, John. I hope as it grows and changes, you’ll share it again so we can see how it matured.

]]> By: julia http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-675 julia Mon, 23 Jul 2007 14:55:35 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-675 That Rhian - always pointing out the same lines that I like... "That is my sky, as good as any other." Very nice! Glad you posted. That Rhian – always pointing out the same lines that I like…
“That is my sky,
as good as any other.”
Very nice! Glad you posted.

]]> By: Camille http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-674 Camille Mon, 23 Jul 2007 13:49:53 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-674 Re: Miriacles out of Mountains out of Molehills A beautiful pledge to the benefits of meditation John. I saw and felt clearly your experience of becoming an adult. A wonderful achievement. Re: Untitled and in progress The simplicity of poetry always pleases me. This poem says 'I walk, I am' to me... the basis for life is existence and movement. Good work in my opinion. Re: Miriacles out of Mountains out of Molehills

A beautiful pledge to the benefits of meditation John. I saw and felt clearly your experience of becoming an adult. A wonderful achievement.

Re: Untitled and in progress

The simplicity of poetry always pleases me. This poem says ‘I walk, I am’ to me… the basis for life is existence and movement. Good work in my opinion.

]]> By: Joy Renee http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-673 Joy Renee Mon, 23 Jul 2007 13:01:40 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-673 love the haunting imagery. love the haunting imagery.

]]> By: rhian http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-672 rhian Mon, 23 Jul 2007 11:57:46 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-672 I liked this John - i thought these words are the heart of the poem: "That is my sky, as good as any other." I liked this John – i thought these words are the heart of the poem:
“That is my sky,
as good as any other.”

]]> By: alf http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/comment-page-1/#comment-671 alf Mon, 23 Jul 2007 11:37:43 +0000 http://sensitivitytothings.com/2007/07/23/you-made-me-do-it/#comment-671 I like the rhythm and simplicity. I like the rhythm and simplicity.

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